A Paper Boat


Oceans green under grey blue skies
I sail past with a broken mast
As time swirls a whirlpool by
I survive,on a paper boat
Blind is the captains eye

On the deck i stand,and stare
The sea spits salt and despair
I vomit back some curse at her
She bellows back,angered at my ire
We love this hate we share

Sunset lent some gold,i think
As the ocean turns to a yellow ,bright
A distant bird flies,
Smiles trickle down my face
As all my gods weep with joy

Nightfall sees a lone star twinkle,
My guitar sings to love
Moon smiles a mothers sigh
I play all night,as i know
The paper boat will sail along
This paper boat,called life

6 comments:

  1. On the deck i stand,and stare
    The sea spits salt and despair
    I vomit back some curse at her
    She bellows back,angered at my ire
    We love this hate we share


    loved the way the words sounded... :d :D nice work

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  2. Oye. LOVED IT!!!! :)

    One of your best..

    Rahter the best till now :D

    ab... give the choc u promised :P

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  3. u just get better with each one eh...good..chalne de! :)

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  4. simply awesome.. hope we more of such insight..

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  5. I loved it...a wonderful picture you have created!...life on a paper boat...so true!

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