Oceans green under grey blue skies
I sail past with a broken mast
As time swirls a whirlpool by
I survive,on a paper boat
Blind is the captains eye
On the deck i stand,and stare
The sea spits salt and despair
I vomit back some curse at her
She bellows back,angered at my ire
We love this hate we share
Sunset lent some gold,i think
As the ocean turns to a yellow ,bright
A distant bird flies,
Smiles trickle down my face
As all my gods weep with joy
Nightfall sees a lone star twinkle,
My guitar sings to love
Moon smiles a mothers sigh
I play all night,as i know
The paper boat will sail along
This paper boat,called life
Nice one..!!!
ReplyDeleteOn the deck i stand,and stare
ReplyDeleteThe sea spits salt and despair
I vomit back some curse at her
She bellows back,angered at my ire
We love this hate we share
loved the way the words sounded... :d :D nice work
Oye. LOVED IT!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteOne of your best..
Rahter the best till now :D
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u just get better with each one eh...good..chalne de! :)
ReplyDeletesimply awesome.. hope we more of such insight..
ReplyDeleteI loved it...a wonderful picture you have created!...life on a paper boat...so true!
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